She is shattered glass gathered!
An abandoned bouquet watered.
A broken heart healed
An open wound stitched
A crushed soul lifted
A cold body warmed
A smile resurrected
A lonely hand held
Loved
salvaged
Held
Lifted
By your compassion
Kindness
Grace and..
Love.
One by one
A piece at a time
Each gathered back by you!
By Susan McMillan
What a knock-out first sentence!!!
Thank-you Susan 💞❤. That comes with a namesake hug.
Wow, this is beautiful
Thank-you love 💓
The 1st sentence feels like the abrupt explosion of breaking glass, with each line supporting the gathering and mending. This is a wonderful poem full of poignant imagery.
Thank-you friend. It’s humbling when one sees the heart of my poem. Thank-you again ❤
Beautiful 🌹
Thank-you Elaine 🌼
I have a magnet on my refrigerator that says “God will heal a broken heart if you give Him all the pieces.” I love the way you expressed similar thoughts.
Thank-you Elizabeth. Yes God will heal. I believe that to be absolutely true. No pieces are too shattered for Him to gather. In life, there are so many people that will love us; gathering pieces through their acts of love, kindness and compassion. Even amidst evil or bad, there are so many beautiful people that will give us their hand to hold. Thank-you so much for your wisdom Elizabeth. I am so honored to get to interact with you on here. It’s always a delight reading what you have to say. Thank-you again and again.🌹
This is fab 🙂
Gorgeous!. This is so full of kindness and hope. Loved it. 🙂
Vivid, and excellent. 🙂
Thank-you my friend
You are most welcome. 🙂
Beautiful lines 🙂
Thank-you Sumyanna 💞
You’re welcome 🙂
I love the way you write. John Keats in the making..
Sherry thank you so much for your kind words. I am greatly humbled to be compared to such a great legend. Thank you again and again my dear 💞
When the sensitivity is in the skin, the verses emerge with greater intensity. A poem of the best.
Thank-you 💞
Your words created a beautiful picture of mending! I felt it. Great Job! ❤
Thank-you sis❤
Wow Susan, this was simply beautiful. You truly have a gift for prose.
I am deeply humbled by your kind words. I absolutely love writing and it even better when kind people see beauty in my pieces. Thank-you again and again 🌻
Nice!!!
I love the way poetry can awaken emotions thought to be in slumber as this poem has for me. Another treasure added to my collection of food for the soul.
Thank-you Cynthia. I love that this piece will be part of your treasures. It’s humbling ❤.